Wednesday, March 17, 2010

A Day No Pigs Would Die

This is a heartwarming story that tells alot of imformation about the life and everyday tasks of a farm boy. In every chapter i was amazed what this young boy had to do for the farm and for his family, in almost every single chapter he had to do something where someone got hurt, or he was in deep shock and regret. Like when rob had to weasle the dog, he must have thought that the dog could have killed the weasle without and major injuries. When rob saw the outcome he, and I, were in aww. Rob regretedit so much and i would have to i would have felt like that was my fault even though someone told me to do it. He was also a little startled when pinky was bleeding when Samson, Mr. Tanner's boar, was unable to breed off of pinky because they found out trhat she was barren. When Rob looked in his Haven's eyes he knew what had to be done, and hated dad for doing his job, but after when Haven came up to Rob and rubbed his hands onn his cheek, he loved his dad for everything and all his knowledge. That for me was the most love in the satory that Haven, ever gave to his son Rob.

2 comments:

  1. Your comments are very valid, but a lack of editing takes away from the overall quality. 27/30

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  2. overall this is a well written essay but you need to make some spelling and gramar corrections

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